Thursday, April 21, 2016

The Twisted Treant by Mehul Patnam

In the jungle sits the biggest tree
Tough and mighty as can be
It's Saplings fall and make no sound
A twisted treant of the ground
 It roots and smashes with little care
Razing through everywhere
A vengeful maelstrom as it goes
But all this for what - that nobody knows

2 comments:

  1. I really like this poem! The rhyme and rhythm are great and I like how you incorporate vivid imagery to create an image of the Twisted Treant.

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  2. I really like this poem! The rhyme and rhythm are great and I like how you incorporate vivid imagery to create an image of the Twisted Treant.

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